JAHAAN MEIN TUMSE.....
Many of us must know the Ghazal "Gulon mein rang bhare" by a legend, "Faiz Ahmed Faiz". Well I have just tried to write a few verses in the same pattern as I like it very much.
Jahaan mein tumse subah, shaam tumse hoti hai,
Shama hai roshan, teri hansi se hi bahaar chale....
Hui jo humse khata, bhul bhi ja ae jaanam,
Yeh kya ke teer-e-nazar, seene ke aar paar chale...
Hai teri chara_gari, jiski humko hasrat thi,
Udaas aaye the tere darr pe Khush_Gawaar chale...
Jo tune pyaar kiya, mujhko ae meri jaana,
Hum bhi tere liye, yeh dil-o-jaan nisaar chale....
Wohi tha hizr ka manzar, wohi visal ka mausam,
Tumhare ashk liye, humko ashk-baar chale...
Jab pukara tha tujhe humne tanhaaii mein,
Go mehki mehki fiza, tujhse hi mushk-baar chale...
Wohi tha hizr ka manzar, wohi visal ka mausam,
Tumhare ashk liye, humko ashk-baar chale...
Jab pukara tha tujhe humne tanhaaii mein,
Go mehki mehki fiza, tujhse hi mushk-baar chale...
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very nice..a fitting tribute to a legend
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ReplyDeleteThanks bhai :)
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